James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Friday, February 14, 2020

To Endure One Must Last Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is here and now my struggle at last
Must be recognized.
One true sentence short of word's is but
A legacy out of grasp and now out of reach.
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James McLain
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Bri Edwards 25 February 2020

p.s. and to " last" **, one must " endure" . you and i sure have! are we to be congratulated? ** last: as a verb: continue until...? :)

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Bri Edwards 25 February 2020

favorite string of words [an idea]: " mistakes repeatedly made expecting a different result? " I'd rather have " love" than " death" as a companion, but Death may 'conquer all', whereas Love may not. bri :)

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Soran M. H 14 February 2020

well done dear poet James for this amazing logical poem, full of philosophy and it needs entire meditation...10/10 A mathematician may then scrutinize.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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