Wednesday, October 30, 2019

To Embrace Her Beau Comments

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She, born of height, cradled by lofty crest,
Mothered by mounts, reared by many a brook,
Dancing down sprightly as spring, still modest,
Oft hiding hind hillocks in cranny's nook,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 October 2019

So beautiful after 4 lines you may like to leave a gap SONNETS ARE WONDERFUL BUT I HAVE NO TACT SO MANY CONSTRAINS AT THAT TACTA THIS TACTA THAT PP ME YU R FOR SONNETS FLAT

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Although I get the hang of what you say, there always remains something unfathomable in your comments. Now this: 'after 4 lines you may like to leave a gap'. Pray can you throw some PP light on it? But first thank you for calling this sonnet 'so beautiful'.

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Anjandev Roy 31 October 2019

An absolute gem. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thank you for reading this 'absolute gem' dear poet, and calling it so, I'm honoured.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2019

A beautiful poem with thrilling expression is well executed. Nice penmanship. Lofty theme. Thank you for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thanks indeed for visiting, reading, and finding it good enough dear poet KM.

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Kostas Lagos 30 October 2019

This poem goes to my list! Thanks friend!

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Thank you dear Kostas Lagos for visiting this poem of old recently revised, and to place it in 'My Poems List.

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