I opened my mind to let go of sufferings
I opened my palm to accept all good things
I opened my heart to let in new dreams
I opened my eyes to see panoramic view of life
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I opened my heart to let in new dreams I opened my eyes to see panoramic view of life I opened my soul to embrace life's grace......I sincerely appreciate the concept of openness expressed here by the poetess. A great poem!
last line....... great mam...... out of world.... soulfull
hm..yes, filtering and refining, submission to an absolute reality for which the poet's soul has been in a sort of pursuit perennial. As we are human beings, and life in many ways are intertwined with immense obligations, responsibilities and observations, to attain the soul's utmost goal, naturally one has to close many vents opening to the above complexities of life, Else truth remain alien behind the expressions, other than another entertaining endeavor only. What wonders me is how the very simple pack words could really announce such an ehsas of the inner self! Well, let me conclude, that's the mehk of an ardent aarzoo.
I opened myself to this earth.........the real beauty of life lies in the complete freedom......where the mind is without fear........your tempting lines are so philosophical.....thanks for sharing...
A beautiful poem with sincerity of feelings Aarzoo Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
only a broad mind can declare this and feel this.....a lovely lyric with fitting diction besides assembling a dazzling picture.....keep sharing.
Beautiful......! When we are receptive, umpteen blessings will flow into us!
So lovely dear. The reader's heart open too. Im in love with this write. Thanku so much for sharing. A very uplifting write. A super 10.
Love and life! ! To embrace the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
If we could all acknowledge, and accept gratitude and positivity, the world would be a much better place. Wonderfully written, Aarzoo. A 10
Nothing like it, let me also open up my soul to embrace nature's beauty......Loved it...10++++
Awesome with high level philosophy of life.