Tuesday, December 10, 2019

To Drink I Make Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was born there
in a naive village
now this is my city
I walk on the city path
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
COMMENTS
Edward Kofi Louis 05 January 2020

No dream! ! ! ! No desire! No food for the hungry belly. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 December 2019

laced with beautiful poetic expressions, full of imagery, some heavy stuff, too heavy for a straight forward writer like me. no thanks I am not ready to digest as yet, dear poet.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 December 2019

I hope you don't drink as in alcohol though. Your poem is impressive and wonderful in how you express your poetic muse. I really liked the lamppost stanza and the dragonfly one. Kudos for a great poem!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2019

A beautiful poem! Fascinating expression with a brilliant last line...admired and appreciated....Top score!

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