For me,
To lie on the bed is to lie to myself.
I'm running, running away.
Hiding, hiding from reality.
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I love the style you have. writing with a purpose. I'll have to hurry and get some of my poetry submitted for you to check out.
lucid words....kinda weird linkage of fantasy and reality...somewhat probes deeper
The writing style with which this poem has been written is really one of a kind as unpredictability is what is reflected and surely it adds a glitter to your poetry.