Saturday, December 30, 2006

To Dream In Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

For me,
To lie on the bed is to lie to myself.
I'm running, running away.
Hiding, hiding from reality.
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Sylvia Thomas
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rohit sapra 20 July 2008

The writing style with which this poem has been written is really one of a kind as unpredictability is what is reflected and surely it adds a glitter to your poetry.

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Geoff Warden 30 December 2006

this is indeed a well flowing piece.....nicely done

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Aaron Carmichael 30 December 2006

I love the style you have. writing with a purpose. I'll have to hurry and get some of my poetry submitted for you to check out.

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Shiladitya Banerjee 30 December 2006

lucid words....kinda weird linkage of fantasy and reality...somewhat probes deeper

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