Wednesday, July 17, 2019

To Douse Fire With Fuel Comments

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A wicked wife and fraudulent friend,
Nursing venomous grouse,
Rogue servants flouting your fair command,
Rodents infested house,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2019

A meaningful limerick with haunting expression is astutely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 July 2019

Thanks for the feedback Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Ravinder Soni 17 July 2019

A nice write but not easy to comprehend.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 July 2019

You have a point, your observation is in place. The poet imagines living in a house with a wife with a grouse and having an affair with your friend; the servants also flout your command; on top of it the house is infested with mice, to chase which a serpent is lurking.... What you think might happen if not a disaster?

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