Saturday, February 24, 2007

To Do, 5/18 Comments

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The face comes again to me;
Serene, sacred granite, cracked and cragged,
Of unforgiving beauty, wrapped in humorless mist,
Highlighted by a heavenly, combed beam
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Gary Witt
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R H 19 April 2008

Wow, this is brilliant Gary - anyone who has ever climbed will understand the beckoning silence that such a face projects. You have captured the essence of this calling, the fear, the allure and the respect that is required to tackle such a 'cracked and cragged' face of 'unforgiving beauty' The religious imagery that underpins this piece suggests a certain reverence towards all that looms before you and reinforces the underlying metaphor as you strive to attain what may appear out of reach, beyond ones grasp and yet continues to ‘challenge and beckon…’ 'To lift myself across God’s brow And answer this blank, threatening stare, Seeing beyond its façade, into eternity.' Beautifully written, not a word out of place - absolutely love this. justine. x

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