we dine at times
in orchid splendor
with pheasant under glass
fine china
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Wonderful, loved last two lines. You make the reader pay attention even till the end. Regards Patricia
CJ, It's great to see you back! This is an exceptionally well-wrought poem. It was a pleasure to read. It's especially apropos this time of the year. Warm regards, Hugh
special poem from a special poet, C.J it's lovely to see you back on this site, either I have missed all your posts or you have had better things to do! ! ! ! ! anyhow nice to see your name again. With respect Vincent
I love all three stanzas. Do I have to pick one? I take the fifth! Great descriptions. Raynette
Ahhhh....this is lovely...and so real! Did you check out my contribution to VD? It's called SPF 45...Thanks for sharing.
Glad to see you back CJ. This is as usual an excellent vision you pose. Rusty
Very beautiful and romantic but I always ask people to not eat life. All life is for living, pheasants, too.