Sunday, September 25, 2005
To Die With You Comments
Rating: ★3.5
You know, sweet lips, I would have
if time and circumstance had granted
the opportunity to be immersed
in death, your death, to share with you.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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John Kay
25 September 2005
Herbert...this is a wonderful poem. Your voice is very calm and steady up until the last line, which feels a little too abrupt maybe, a little too loud.
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7/28/2025 7:54:01 PM # 1.0.0
i like that one very much, too. i like it when your voice is soft and when you are brave enough to show your soft side. u.