Thursday, June 12, 2008

To Death(An Ode) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dreams haunt a future that lies fallow,
and memories cloud a heart that dies hollow,
a life that despairs into tommorow,
beckons from the grave, and inscribes the words that follow.
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Peya Jakob
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An excellent Ode to Death. I love the way our lines commence short and lengthen as the poem unfolds, then declines again as it allows the reader to ride with the journey of the poem. 10 love Karin

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Fred Babbin 18 August 2008

Although I write much that is not uplifting, , I don't like to do that. But I think this is one of your better poems.

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