Friday, April 25, 2008

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Rating: 2.8

When an elephant is at the peak of inspiration
A simple ant bite sends him home ward
Then he becomes the real he
Challenges those who have enslaved him and his
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Raveendran N.V.
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Alison Cassidy 09 May 2008

This is brilliant Raveendran. A mighty subject made even mightier by the skill of your pen. Your title is perfect and your have blended the formidable and the ordinary to great effect. You are certainly a poet to be reckoned with. Splendid write. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 30 April 2008

What a splendid poem, You take me to a different world and I am enjoying the creative experience. Excellent as always. Warmest regards, Sandra

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