Thursday, January 12, 2017

To Close My Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've just to close my eyes
To see the flowers in the meadow,
The grasses flowing gently,
Subtle greens and brilliant yellow.
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Sarah Persson
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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2017

I don´t know why, but your poems touch my very heart constantly in a way I cannot explain.. Indeed, closing the eyes conjures magic, we can concentrate and let them appear, time and again. The hearth shows a pleasant warmth, coziest rendered. An amazingky 10 and much more!

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 January 2017

Sarah, You are among my most favourite poets, whose poems, I come back to re-read often...

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Sarah Persson 12 January 2017

Truly humbling, thank you

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 January 2017

Hi Sarah, A poem coming from your heart and touching the reader on his very heart! Exquisitely rendered. One has to just close one's eyes to open his heart/life to the nature, to outside, to oneself. Once one closes one's eyes, everything around comes to life: the dancing green of the meadows, the mellow tunes of guitar, a folk-song beside the camp-fire, ocean's subtle tones and torqouise waves, the solitude reverberating in silence.., yes, everything you cherish, everything you want to see, hear and touch.. A very good one to come back to read again...100++

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Sarah Persson 12 January 2017

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this one so much. The pleasures in life really are there always, in the blink of an eye. Thank you for your generous vote too Unnikrishnan

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