'It's winter, it's winter! '-you once exclaimed with glee,
I merely stared at your bright eyes of sunshine rays,
Your laugh chilled me like running water from once frozen rivers,
With lips like morning spring dew and fresh newly-sprung grass,
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Beautiful metaphor, nice introspection and written well. Keep up the good job, write more.
if spring can turn to human ...she would look and act like you....a fantastic line i like it.....i enjoyed it too....please see my poems