Tuesday, November 20, 2018

To Cage A Blue Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

After a moderate supper
He went for a walk, about a mile
The galaxy of stars was making silhouettes
And the moon was playing hide and seek
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M. Asim Nehal
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Valsa George 28 November 2018

A lovely poem! Though it is only a dream, the empathy and compassion he feels for the bird is so genuinely described! In fact it is lesson for everyone who cages birds and prevents their free flight in the sky! Freedom is a treasured thing both for man and beast! A 10

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M Asim Nehal 28 November 2018

Thank u so much Madam Valsa Ji.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 November 2018

A wonderful story of kindness, compassion and freedom. So full of wisdom. If we will abide by this wisdom, there will be harmony. Beautifully crafted write with superb imagery.10

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M Asim Nehal 20 November 2018

Thank u so much Rose.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 November 2018

what a treat tis to read ur blue poetry and comments of dear Kumara Mangalam ji he has blacklisted me and you have also taken steps to ignore what error have i done to ur hatred secure both of u are great poets I love to read today while having oranges I remembered thee

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M Asim Nehal 20 November 2018

Life is too short to fight with someone, I was away for 10 days and missed PH. Thx Much

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2018

They went a mile far in super galaxy and this was amazing really. Fragrance of several flowers were competing. A bird was thinking to get freedom. With a joy in face bird wanted to sing. An interesting poem is very well penned with rich imagery and excellent presentation...10

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M Asim Nehal 20 November 2018

Thank u so much Sir Kumarmani Ji, Your comments are always special...

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