After a moderate supper
He went for a walk, about a mile
The galaxy of stars was making silhouettes
And the moon was playing hide and seek
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A wonderful story of kindness, compassion and freedom. So full of wisdom. If we will abide by this wisdom, there will be harmony. Beautifully crafted write with superb imagery.10
what a treat tis to read ur blue poetry and comments of dear Kumara Mangalam ji he has blacklisted me and you have also taken steps to ignore what error have i done to ur hatred secure both of u are great poets I love to read today while having oranges I remembered thee
Life is too short to fight with someone, I was away for 10 days and missed PH. Thx Much
They went a mile far in super galaxy and this was amazing really. Fragrance of several flowers were competing. A bird was thinking to get freedom. With a joy in face bird wanted to sing. An interesting poem is very well penned with rich imagery and excellent presentation...10
Thank u so much Sir Kumarmani Ji, Your comments are always special...
A lovely poem! Though it is only a dream, the empathy and compassion he feels for the bird is so genuinely described! In fact it is lesson for everyone who cages birds and prevents their free flight in the sky! Freedom is a treasured thing both for man and beast! A 10
Thank u so much Madam Valsa Ji.