Tuesday, December 20, 2011

To Breeze! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.8

Play not with me O wanton Breeze!
enjoy with flower-laden trees...

speak! for whom you softly blow?
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Shahzia Batool
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Valsa George 05 June 2015

A sweet little poem.... very musical like the hum of gentle breeze!

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Ramesh Rai 05 September 2013

an xlent beautiful poem. i think it should be morning breeze. just hour befre i was thinking to write on this subject.

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Adeline Foster 18 April 2012

This is such a light and happy poem; it is a shame that some want to read into it what was not intended. Your appreciation and pleasure for a restful, quiet breeze comes through. Read mine – O Night – Adeline

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 21 December 2011

A light poem that properly suits the theme it conveys.One can feel playing with the wanton damsel.

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Shahzia Batool

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