To Borechka 6 Comments

You identified the topic of this poem as LOVE AND DREAMS, and it is the dream element which prevails, especially in the last two stanzas. In the opening stanza even an argument between the two of you is different from ordinary experience: instead of being divided the two of you are merged; that's your word to identify the specialness of your rapport. There is some kind of poetry shared before he departs, and that experience makes him present even in absence. YOUR VISIT WAS LIKE MUSIC show this is no ordinary love and it creates a reality of calm with no interfering disagreements. This poem of human love is almost - dare I say it - a Return to the Garden at the beginning of time.

You identified the topic of this poem and

Oh, I will not forget you. your visit was like music. That evening calmed contention of all the revolutions.... loved these lines. Beautiful poem with nice diction. Thanks.