Thursday, August 25, 2016

'To Be Young Is Too Dangerous' Comments

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The most perilous stage of life
Having many dreams, thoughts & seeks
And many destroyer for them
Love, lust, strength and zeal as
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Pavan meena
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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2016

~Any age can seem trying, as they each have their own problems. Being young means little experience and a lack of understanding by elders (who used to be young themselves) A few grammatical errors but I assume English is a second language. Keep on writing and learning, Pavan Peace

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Pawan Meena 27 August 2016

Thankx sir And u were right that English is my second language so its a bit difficult to write poems in English but i like English so I'll try to do my best. I m very obliged for your comments and advises.

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Pawan Meena 27 August 2016

Hi sir And u were right that English is my second language so its a bit difficult to write poems in English but i like English so I'll try to do my best. I m very obliged for your comments and advises.i

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2016

Any age can seem trying, as they each have their own problems. Being young means little experience and a lack of understanding by elders (who used to be young themselves) A few grammatical errors but I assume English is a second language. Keep on writing and learning, Pavan Peace

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 August 2016

Perilous stage! ! Nice work.

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