Thursday, July 31, 2008
To Be With You Comments
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To be with you
is what I want......
I think it is not soo much
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Domy sweet
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silver phoenix
31 July 2008
Its good however keep in mind(little suggestion, u instead of you and i instead of I is sometimes not as good in poetry, since your poetry is meant to be as galant as possible. Great work, please check some of mine and rate and comment if you want, Constructive criticism is welcome too. Thankyou, Kilian
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7/26/2025 11:58:01 PM # 1.0.0
Very simple and sweet poem. I am with you.