Friday, August 15, 2008

To Be Touched Comments

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Your hot breath on my chest
Congers images of burning flesh
Bends life through a prism
And cast nothing
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Michael McCall
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Delwen Doyle 28 August 2008

passionate & intense nicely done!

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Pied Piper Berry 22 August 2008

I would agree with Steven Feanley below. Your poem is vivid and memorable. It is very angry but well written.

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Ronald Stroman 15 August 2008

yr poem don't need no toothpaste. it smells fresh. continue poetically. take care.

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Steven Fearnley 15 August 2008

great poem, concise, vivid, memorable.

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Michael McCall

Michael McCall

Washington
Michael McCall
Michael McCall
Washington
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