Saturday, December 5, 2020

To Be My Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

To be my moon
You need to
Pluck the stars
From the sky
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Aarzoo Mehek
COMMENTS
Varsha M 15 December 2020

So very true ma'am. You made it bloom.

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 December 2020

Lovely poem. A master stroke.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2020

'Be the encapsulation Of class and devotion.' - That is achievable with efforts; the other two conditions, poetically possible to achieve, but actually not. Wonderful poetic declaration,5 Stars*****!

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 05 December 2020

Beautiful description. Amazing poem. Enjoyed reading.

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Rajnish Manga 05 December 2020

Thanks also for the choice of this beautiful picture. Just awesome.

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Rajnish Manga 05 December 2020

Exquisitely crafted poem. Lovers need to be reciprocated with dignity, respect and love without being an hypocrite. This has remained the mantra of love since time immemorial. Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem.

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