To Be Mine Comments
You are destined to be mine
To make me happy and feel fine
Never desert me in any circumstance
It is heavenly and god sent chance
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Interesting... Daniel Johnson31 minutes ago I am having a hard time trying to figure out exactly what this poem is about. I don't think it is necessarily bad, but, I think you may need to word things differently and choose different words in different places. For example Let all our moments play music, as love has been the theme and basic. Basic by itself is rather odd. Something that may work is Let all our moments play music, as love has been the theme and lyric. Another place that could use some work is We are meant to be model, and be guide to others to excel. Try We are meant to be the model, A Guide for others to excel. I think that this can be made into a wonderful poem, you just need to reword some things and try again.
You are destined to be mine To make me happy and feel fine
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