Sunday, September 29, 2013

To Be Loved By You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slowly like sand I am collapsing
With mild touch of the lovely wind
Body like high cliff, soul falcon ring
Ah! Knowledge, flown wisdom to find
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Sallam Yassin 30 September 2013

give me haven take me home take me home take the hand touch the heart to be loved by you is my goal/ it is breath taking but giving hope

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Farah Ilyas 29 September 2013

I am not hopeless but homeless...looks like as each word iz composed by the core of ur hearth by such dignity, not to be expressed in words, .....Here in this earth, worth playing chess To be loved by you, is my goal...yeap it should be desired by everyone but unfortunately trade fair of world bewildered us Shoddily...thanks for sharing such worthfull artistic piece among us.

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Abhishek Mishra 29 September 2013

Exceptionally beautiful..fabulous one sir: -) please read my poems and comment if you find them worth.

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