Saturday, April 9, 2011

To Be Locked Up And Put Away Comments

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The first day of the week,
Seven days of nothing at all,
I lay on my bed staring at the wall,
my bare feet and the toilet missing it's seat.
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Jason Young
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Ruth Rayment 11 April 2011

This poem is extremely descriptive.... An eye-opener of a read.... I enjoyed the suspensed ending.... good work! !

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Arfa Iris 09 April 2011

did u really experience it?

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Jason Young

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