To Be Free Comments

Wonderful poem. We have to stand up for what we believe in. We have to follow our heart. At the same time, dear Kelsea, do keep an open heart and an open mind. Even though sometimes we really need to take a hard stance, communicating the hard stance in a soft spoken and polite way is often best. Firm and soft, strong and polite, determined and kind, .... Yes Kelly, I like the poem very much, break free from the lies, keep searching for the truth. The search for Truth, is a never ending committment for those who want to live really a true life. Remembering the 3 Rs may be helpful: reverence for life, reflection (daily silent, perhaps prayerful. reflection in nature or in a quiet room) and reading (books have been written by experts on almost everything we do; if we read with a critical mind, books can make a huge difference in our life) I wish you all the best. Wanting truth and wanting to live the truth is one of the noblest wishes. Mix it with wisdom and you will do marvellous things, making a big difference in this world.

i wa very inspired i felt every word ever phrase which now is a inspiration to me beautiful

I love the way you come right out like a fire breathing dragon, 'Let me be free'. I love it. It is powerful and so heart felt all the way. I salute you Miss Kelsea for picking up the blade and weilding it in the cause of freedom. You are a warrior ready for the fight. And you have taken up such a worthy cause that so many others have gallantley died for. Also you are a truth seeker, which walks hand in hand with freedom. I feel proud of you as one who has the longevity of youth in your corner to be strongly dedicated as a champion for freedom. We need you and many others with your passion to pick up that sword and walk with you. My hats off to you. Jim Troy

Inspirational......from the heart....and so very well worded. Your poem brought a tear to my eye....... It seems so relavant to my situation just now.. and Im sure many others......At 17 years old you write like a natural and you are proof that age is just a number.... Great work..... Kelsea Osterman

Stunning piece of work. I love the revolutionary thoughts right is right and wrong is wrong no matter where you live in the world. You must stand up for what is right, stand up and be damned. Someone once said I'd rather live for tens seconds stood up than live two minutes on my knees. Excellent Piece full of action and imagery. Regards. Craig

Nice poem....you have to stand on wat u think is right.