Saturday, December 26, 2020

To Be Forgotten Comments

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So many stars
and many many sands,
rising sun and petals
in the bloom. Each time
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Xelam Kan™
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Bri Edwards 26 December 2020

line 8 'mind's'? mind is Ah, Xelam, you are still writing in the negative direction, at least towards the end of poem. But, you may have every reason to do so. Best wishes to you. bri ;)

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