Saturday, September 15, 2012

To Be Forever With You Never Comments

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When I was but a withered leaf,
where art thou my love?
When air was scarce, I hardly breathe...
When I longed for you to be there,
...
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Indranil Bhaduri 04 October 2012

Fantastic piece of lines...emotional, romantic, touching hearts.. loved this.

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Danny Draper 24 September 2012

Wear out thy love and it will know solemn privations most unrequited.

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Manleh Castillo 24 September 2012

...each phrase captures my attention...indicative of improving one's attentiveness...thanks for sharing this..

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The beauty of the lines lies in the aptness of assumptions and conclusions made. The power of your imagination surfaces in your choice of themes

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Payal Parande 17 September 2012

so emotional and beautiful...each word with deep meaning is absolutely phenomenal it makes you wonder how love can bring you so much pain but yet it is the most desirable emotion........ thank you so much for sharing mam, love payal

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