Friday, February 2, 2018

To Be Childlike Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forgive me for hurting your feelings
Which my selfish mind never cares for
I always wanted to be loved
And to occupy the small space in your heart
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Rini Shibu
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Bill Cantrell 03 February 2018

It is the child within us that can recognize love, this poem is really compelling and touching, very well written!

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Rini Shibu 03 February 2018

Thanks Bill..! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2018

A very lovely and touching poem that captures a great love to a friend. It expresses in detail the beautiful feelings that nurture friendship.10

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Rini Shibu 03 February 2018

Thanks Rose for posting your remarks! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2018

A sweet sensitive poem, very touching, this poem has something endearing, because it is a close relationship between two people, a very special relationship given the build-up of the sentences in the poem. I have enjoyed enormously this excellently worded poem. A 10 and much much more for the voting

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Rini Shibu 02 February 2018

Thank you so much Sylvia! !

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Lamar Cole 02 February 2018

This is a very heartfelt and very touching poem so full of emotion.

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Rini Shibu 02 February 2018

Thanks Lamar! ! ! !

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Bipasha D 02 February 2018

So much feelings in your poem Rini...

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Rini Shibu 02 February 2018

Thank you so much Bipasha! ! !

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