Wednesday, March 22, 2017

To Be Born Like This Comments

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To be born like this; Sexually apprehensive
Feelings of shame at others embarrassment
Their tight improper jeans moulded
To pipes of skinny flesh; lumps
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Daniel Peter Jones
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Jean Harold 24 March 2017

Always love it when the poet gives it back to the readers to answer

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Daniel Jones 24 March 2017

Thank you for your comment, i hope it had the desired affect of magnifying the doubt and paranoia i tried to express.

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Unwritten Soul 24 March 2017

Why am I writing? Why are you reading? ....That rhetoric question make this poem even conclusive.

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Daniel Jones 24 March 2017

thanks for your comment unwritten soul, trying to purvey paranoia and anxiety, self doubt, i thought finishing the poem like this creates that feeling of worry, stress, again i appreciate your comment, Thank you

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