Saturday, September 5, 2020

To Be A Witness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moisture in my eyes, to be a witness
My heartbroken, to be a witness
The intrigues of those eyes are strange
My simplicity, to be a witness
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Shakira Nandini
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Denis Mair 06 September 2020

This is a gentle summons to be receptive and vulnerable to the inner life of another person. Every person wants to be known and felt... to matter in another person's thougths. To be a witness, we need to be passionate and caring and open and curious. Like a dancer, your lyrical voice conveys how a person can be there for someone else. A 10!

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Ace Of Black Hearts 05 September 2020

To be an witness in the burdens and love we share. So a lonely yet heartfelt loving poem. I can feel so many emotions from beginning to end keep up the good work.

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