Sunday, March 21, 2010

To Be A Star Comments

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How would it be
To be a star
What would i see
From way up far...
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Destry Miller
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I like that. Kinda sounded like twinkle twinkle little star, but sadder. I don't know if you were going for that. It also sounds just like my poem The World We Live In, rhythm wise.

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