To Be A Dream Comments

I agree with Daniel below. Well done.

You just submitted this poem TODAY! I love to read a freshly written poem just beginning its life in the world. There's no way to know this early how long it will live and how many readers it will affect. But the theme of a DREAM appeals to many readers myself included and you make that dream, that escape from pain very alluring. And your tone is quietly persuasive, you din't demand we listen but invite us to pay attention to you. I think your rhyming is well chosen to convey that tine.

Awesome poem..................liked it.