Thursday, February 16, 2006

To Be A Crocodile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lying on the bank, all the While
I want to be a Crocodile
To get up and chase is not my Style
But that's the Life, on the Sunny Nile
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David Darbyshire
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Patricia Gale 16 February 2006

Cute, funny, but then thats Dave! Hugs Patricia

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Martha J. Eshelman-Smith 16 February 2006

I found the use of capitals distracting. I ended up trying to determine the pattern of capitals rather than enjoying the humor of the poem.

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Zahraa Song 16 February 2006

Ha ha! Funny poem crocodile......Love Zainab

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