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To Be... Comments

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To Be...

To strive,
to be the best you can be
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Annette Aitken
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Bri Edwards 20 February 2018

Hey! ! ! you can't have MY happiness! ! ! Give it back to me! ! ! ASAP. i wondered where it wandered off to. i suppose you are writing the modern Lady Chatterley's Lover, starring YOU! ! I think i read the book once, and it was not even required reading. yours probably will be. bri :)

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Tom Billsborough 21 March 2017

Your happiness is my happiness... Good line which I fully endorse. Nothing better than making another happy. Lovely poem, Annette.

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Christopher Tye 18 March 2017

Wonderfully inspiring poem, a joy to read.

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Bill Cantrell 09 March 2017

To be..is a path where life has many roads, happiness is to befriend to strive and definitely be cautious, very nice Annette

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