Sunday, April 5, 2020

To Awake Comments

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So many faces in the lines
on the ceiling above my bed,
I lay here seeing
autostereograms created in my head.
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Smoky Hoss
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Glen Kappy 15 April 2020

sojourners we are, smoky. and we'll never lack for questions or mysteries. i just keep doing what i've been given to do and pray for God's will to be done and for me to trust him for it. -glen

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2020

So many faces you observe but still you feel the wonder. Still wee hope to discover a journey in dream or sleep. This poem is very interestingly penned.

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Kostas Lagos 06 April 2020

Well written poem Smoky!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 April 2020

A well thought amazing poem.....10+++

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