Friday, January 21, 2011

To And Fro Comments

Rating: 5.0

A candle sits and flickers on the old table.
Light and shadows dance about…
Untamed,
the hues come and go,
...
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Kevin Carney
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Terence George Craddock 27 January 2011

'Bright, your eyes reflect the flames in and out. Soft the light, it outlines and softens your beautiful face… It’s so much like your life… Such a delicate balance, dictated by the motion of the wind. It sways you to and fro, with nowhere to go.' A poem flickering in and out of romantic emotions transposed into eternal greatness. Another exceptional write.

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Tsira Gogeshvili 23 January 2011

Kevin, I read it as beautiful confession before the tiny candle... and it's so fine...10.... Ts.

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