Monday, October 8, 2018

To Accommodate Your Love Comments

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How do I fly in that sky~
Where clouds are black
Even the air is afraid to go there
And run towards the sea
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nosheen Irfan 10 October 2018

Oh love can be hard and bitter at times. The realities of life often kill a budding love. Well penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 October 2018

under such difficult circumstance its best to enter a loveds heart and once you have secured a place stay inside for ever no more a dissatisfaction will you have as you reside within her then keep singing a love song or two kick me out beloved oh never send some oranges sweet as are you I love to taste you

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 October 2018

Where do i call you my lover! ! Love and art! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2018

A suitable place is not found to rest or fly but still you can fly with love, hope and dignity when you overcome obstacles with courage. An interesting poem is very beautifully penned...10

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