Saturday, October 11, 2014

To A Venus' Flytrap Comments

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This world is merely a Venus' Flytrap,
In birth and death is a moment of gap,
Life is the petals that act like bars,
All living things are prisoners of wars,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 27 November 2017

Life may be a deception but I shall prefer to die in love instead of dying in hate. Great thoughts, great poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 October 2014

Wow that a lovely wish from a poet in poets notes..... Life may be a deception but I shall prefer to die in love instead of dying in hate. Very true said, its better to live a life beautifully in love so that one will not feel regret of having never lived. Loved the way you captured Venus Flytrap in love.

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Salini Nair 12 October 2014

Our life is nothing but a very short gap, With love to deception of a Venus' Flytrap! ..................beautiful....i like it

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 12 October 2014

Infact women are the most tortured lot or in other way they torture the most. but here the women..

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Valsa George 12 October 2014

Life appears like an innocent flower....! As we attempt to enjoy its beauty and fragrance, it traps us like a Venus flytrap and we are made prisoners until death..... Between our birth and death, there is only limited time! Instead of spoiling that life in war and rebellion, let us enjoy it in peace and romance (love) ! Great ideas, clverly presented!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2014

Attractive poem.Very nice writing.

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Khalida Bano Ali 11 October 2014

A thoughtful poem with a lovely message.

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