This world is merely a Venus' Flytrap,
In birth and death is a moment of gap,
Life is the petals that act like bars,
All living things are prisoners of wars,
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Wow that a lovely wish from a poet in poets notes..... Life may be a deception but I shall prefer to die in love instead of dying in hate. Very true said, its better to live a life beautifully in love so that one will not feel regret of having never lived. Loved the way you captured Venus Flytrap in love.
Our life is nothing but a very short gap, With love to deception of a Venus' Flytrap! ..................beautiful....i like it
Infact women are the most tortured lot or in other way they torture the most. but here the women..
Life appears like an innocent flower....! As we attempt to enjoy its beauty and fragrance, it traps us like a Venus flytrap and we are made prisoners until death..... Between our birth and death, there is only limited time! Instead of spoiling that life in war and rebellion, let us enjoy it in peace and romance (love) ! Great ideas, clverly presented!
Life may be a deception but I shall prefer to die in love instead of dying in hate. Great thoughts, great poem.