Wednesday, December 27, 2006

To A Teen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tom's buddy ran a secret lab,
made funny little pills.
The gift he had was of the gab:
'My uppers cure all ills.'
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 28 December 2006

Powerfully put, Herbs. The rhyme appears deceptively jolly at first, but ultimately it gives the piece its resounding force.

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Alison Cassidy 28 December 2006

A clever cautionary tale Herbert. Beneath its flippant mask, there is a strong and timely message here. 'When will they ever learn? ' love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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