Wednesday, August 24, 2005

To A Sad Girl Comments

Rating: 4.6

There is no way to explain
Unending sorrow and grief,
No way to kiss a young girl’s cheek
In a way that would give her back
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Uriah Hamilton
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John''s 21 September 2018

Who tf made 9/11 tho?

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M Sagnik Das 22 May 2017

a good sad poem with lots of expression

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Duncan Wyllie 10 March 2006

We cannot replace loved ones but we can find solitude in the comfort of others.A caring word can sometimes make us realise this.Love Duncan

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Adriana Cruz 07 September 2005

'Humans are brave enough To live and bleed and die, But to be the one remaining As others say goodbye Is too much to withstand.' way to make a girl cry. you speak nothing but the truth. i cheer for you from the sidelines of this world.

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Edward Grey 24 August 2005

most excelent

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Michael Philips 24 August 2005

I agree with Kathleen that this is a very good poem. The final stanza is superb.

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Kathleen Paul-Flanagan 24 August 2005

Such a sad one, Uriah. Very good poem. Loved the evil stars line.

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Mary Nagy 24 August 2005

This is such a remarkable poem Uriah. It's so hard to understand how deep the sorrow is when you are left while your loved ones go unless you've experienced it. This is very well done. Sincerely, Mary

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Raynette Eitel 24 August 2005

This poem goes with my poems today 'The Candle' and 'Dreamquake.' There must be evil stars about that touched our poetry. This is so sad and very well done. Raynette

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 24 August 2005

Very sad, touching poem.

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