Monday, July 16, 2018

To A Puppet In The Dust Bin Comments

Rating: 5.0

The puppet is dancing on the stage,
the crowd is enchanted by the colors
how sexy are her costumes!
While dancing,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Sonali Ganguly 12 April 2019

Brilliant composition...

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Valsa George 18 July 2018

This embodies a great message in it! However charming a person be, once fallen he/ she will be dumped into the bin! But the fall of one with a humane heart will greatly be grieved and people will rush to save him/her come out of the dumps! A Wonderful poem!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 July 2018

U SIR R A MAN OF GREAT CREATIVITY U SHOW US IN A PUPPET A WOMAN'S DESIRE AND BEAUTY ALL WANT LOVE AND ADMIRATION ONLY U GRANT IT FREELY generously smashingly as the thread s are broken unwantonly suddenly

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 July 2018

Beautiful poem with a great message. It doesn't take time to replace old one with new puppet. The stage is same but puppets changed. Loved the concept.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2018

A great message has been delivered through a puppet touchingly and astutely. How a person feels under the leadership of heartless person is astutely painted. I quote...... You ruled the hearts but you lacked a heart. For a heartless dancer there are only whistles of the moment. A marvelous poem shared.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 July 2018

Yes - so nicely penned The rejected puppet in the dust bin is crying and remembering his lovely time when she ruled the hearts. Sweetheart! ............ ...// true advice- Learn to live and love with a loving heart yeah right you are sir

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 July 2018

Akhtar, such an outstanding poem👍👍👍

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 July 2018

A metaphor on the present political siuation of the country. A well penned poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2018

The puppet is dancing on the stage/the crowd is enchanted by the colors..I always appreciate the inherent beauty and lucidity of your poetic expression! A wonderful piece of work! (10)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 July 2018

A great poem with a meaningful message. Leadership without heart will never be loved by the people whom he ruled. The thee last lines of this wonderful poem are very moving. Beautifully crafted write.10+++++

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