Wednesday, September 17, 2008

To A Newborn Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

O' welcome little human child, this lovely summer morn,
A better day could scarce be found for you to have been born!
It matters not in any case if you are girl or boy.
Ahead lies life's adventures, some sad, some filled with joy
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Frank Halliwell
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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 September 2008

excellent! ! ! excellent! ! ! excellent! ! ! ....the rythm..the rhyme..the construction...all perfect to my senses...the protrayal of lifes cycle is done very very beautifully...much impressed! ..10!

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