Monday, August 31, 2020
To A Nameless Girl Comments
Rating: ★5.0
You crept silently into my dreams
Like a shadow unseen
You made a home in my heart
One which you would never see
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Matthew Holloway
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Deluke Muwanigwa
01 September 2020
Nicely done. I think if you included the title of your poem in the poem it would haunt the girl better. Possibly your first line could be your title then your 4th and finally 7th line could also be the title. My 2 cents
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8/12/2025 4:34:08 AM # 1.0.0
the girl the nameless comes and awakes the inside sleeping eyes of love.........