To A Lost Soul Comments

dont make me come bangladesh Just to check on you don't stop writing please let me how you are doing

Not a lot of rhyming, but its still there, it joins it together in a sense. I like the similie you used, our love is like, swimming in a fish bowl, it made me have to think on the comparison which was interesting. Ten, and nice wording

To loose a soul is like a life without destiny............soul is the bitterweet of life!