Tuesday, January 29, 2013

To A Friend Comments

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CALM though unseen the presumptions of your being,
Gentle the soft speeches of your vocals-
The heart of your manliness.
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Okoronkwo Jonathan Jackson
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..... W@king Up..... 29 April 2013

This poem is good :) couldn't help but notice how you treat thy like an unborn child. Learn to vary your words, using hath, thine, etc...but still, a great write dedicated to a good friend. -W

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Okoronkwo Jonathan Jackson

Okoronkwo Jonathan Jackson

Ebonyi State Nigeria
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