Saturday, March 7, 2015

To A Friend-1 Comments

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To a friend-1
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Not only am I made
Of flesh and bone
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Jitesh Shah 18 March 2015

very nice and a beautiful poem sir and also read my poems

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Amitava Sur 10 March 2015

The pain in loss of friendship is epxpressed with sad feelings with a heavy heart, very emotional with an intense feeling.

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Rajesh Thankappan 09 March 2015

A friend's scorn and spite is worse that what the worst of a harsh season can throw at us. So the attempt for a reconciliation as is made in the concluding two lines of the poem , though painful, can only be the best and right step forward. A beautiful write.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 08 March 2015

Beautifully composed with good flow verging on the abstract! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2015

Aptly and nicely composed. A beautiful poem, I like it. Many thanks Patnayak sir.

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Valsa George 08 March 2015

Losing a friend is heart rending..... being misunderstood by him is even bitter! If the friendship can be patched up through compromise, before 'you' go your way, .... listen to this! A poignant write!

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