Saturday, September 9, 2006

To A Debutante On Her Eightiegth Birthday... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now old, joints arthritic,
Skin callused and sagging
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John Tansey
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Bill Thomas 16 January 2009

It's the ending, John - you're totally in control of where the poem's going, &, even though we can envision the lady, you still manage to punch us with those last three lines. Excellent.

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John Tansey

John Tansey

Bronx, New York
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