Titleless Comments

It's appropriate you called this TITLELESS because it is really about EVERYTHING THAT EXISTS squeezed into one day. And your title alerts us to the fact this day's activities represents the repetition of things over and over, day after day. There is a heaviness of spirit this reality might convey but your poem treats it as lightly as a feather and reveals an astonishing spiritual lightness.It shows that life cannot be reduced to those events unfolding one after another but rather life is the flow of energy which carries them through time and space. And Life transcends these details in a joy of Being. That's what your poem gives me.

An excellently penned poem- - -Life's journey told in so few words and in such beauty ! ! Loved reading the poem.