Friday, April 11, 2008

Titanic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Full ahead in the dead of night
Steaming in the moons half light
Boilers working at full capacity
Hissing steam with such tenacity
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Bob Gibson
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Fiona Davidson 23 November 2008

Lovely atmospheric poem...made me feel like I was there...thank you for sharing....

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What a discription! As if you were actually there, dear Bob! I was invited to 'Tiatanic Number 2' (read my poem) , and I had similar shocking emotions. Thanks for sharing

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Fay Slimm 03 September 2008

A cryptic ending to a truly historic event and one in which you draw the reader in Bob. The sea, yes, once again wins, and living beside it I really understand the truth in that. A ten for this for sure Bob.

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mmmnjbni jhbkjnbkjlnio 20 July 2008

I find this poem fantastic as if you were actually there! ! incredible...keep it up.

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