Full ahead in the dead of night
Steaming in the moons half light
Boilers working at full capacity
Hissing steam with such tenacity
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What a discription! As if you were actually there, dear Bob! I was invited to 'Tiatanic Number 2' (read my poem) , and I had similar shocking emotions. Thanks for sharing
A cryptic ending to a truly historic event and one in which you draw the reader in Bob. The sea, yes, once again wins, and living beside it I really understand the truth in that. A ten for this for sure Bob.
I find this poem fantastic as if you were actually there! ! incredible...keep it up.
Lovely atmospheric poem...made me feel like I was there...thank you for sharing....