Thursday, April 13, 2006

Titanic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two miles down
In the eerie dark depths
She sleeps
The cold current sweeps across the barnacled rails of the bow
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Laurence Overmire
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John Libertus 13 April 2006

Beautiful imagery, Nice contrast between the human angst and grief, and the calm beauty of the deep. You again make music of your meaning.

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Duncan Wyllie 13 April 2006

Dear Laurence, this is without any doubt a truly beautiful and uplifting poem from the heart and as I have said before and may say again, it's the only place worth writing from, Love Duncan

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