Titanic 2 Comments

Great composition from a great poet of ISP! Kudos to you Mr. Joseph Josephides!

Dear Joseph, History teaches us all a lesson. The Titanic episode is heart-rending and will ever remain so. I could gauge the sadness in you over the happening long years ago and your innate feelings to avert it for ever in your verse on Titanic number 2. Very well captured! How you in Cyprus and I in India, think alike! In one of my poems titled ' Pre-determined ' I had menioned about Titanic. Regards,

History gives birth to errors from error seed. Wake up, and let their second lie be sunk with its illuminations, with the orchestra that was paid to offer amusement. Come to yourself, fall in the ocean of your own truth. Keep on swimming. Found half-choked, you are saved but only in the hands of juvenile Nafsika; hope still exists. I Can't Find the words to say How much i loved these Lines Simple Great If everyone Dug their inner souls and searched for their own truth our World will be Purified From the lise and Deceits

This poem is nice as it sounds interesting. The way you expressed yourself is nice.

a lovely poem u get 10/10++

juvenile nafsika (the Spirit) u write Arabic?

Hi Joseph, this is an interesting poem, although I cant see why you have dedicated it to me? unless I am a sinking ship? Maybe you are dedicating it to all the girls! HA! much love, Catie :)

You carry great words with a challenge within this poem. Very well crafted. Excellent verse! ...Give you 10! give you more if I could. Best wishes Suzan Gumush

This is a very good poem.

The denizens of steerage shall always 'go down with the ship'Very thought provoking, (and challenging) , writing.